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Tuesday, July 6, 2021

 one day kupe went fishing but they cuaght nothing they only cuaght green goey slime so he went to a meeting and he said we didint catch anything after kupe said do you have a pet octopus said kupe yes i do well look what i found it is  octopus guts where is your pet octopus anyways i dont knoow it snuck away last night so where is it then said kupe if you find it please dont do anything to it please oh we wont trust me okay after the meeting he went hunting for the octopus he found the octopus and the battle was on kupe jumeped out and killed the octopus after the battle he sailed to a mysterys place and it was nz and he went to explore nz and he met some people and when back and kupe toke the octopus with him 

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Johno!
    Awesome work - that's such a well written retelling of the story of Kupe! Ka pai! It sounds like Kupe broke his promise to not hurt the octopus though. Why do you think he did? Would you have kept it safe?
    Nic (Intern Teacher)

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  2. Hi Johno I like your work. Maybe next time you could put some full stops in and remember to do a capital letter when you say I. How did you find out this stuff about kupe? from Layla

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